new blog 11/3

i believe that our pitch went alright, we did a very good job on catching everyones attention and while doing this it was entertaining. the only downfall to our pitch was we didnt throw the smaller details into it like we did in our practice pitch. we have all of the smaller things in our actuall idea, and it doesnt mean to look like an apple commercial so we will take those thoughts in and use them to our advantage.